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To the lonely sea and the skyin the dim of twilight
I feel immortal
but I feel blue;
stardust and sun drenched
torsos

watercolor pain

like the desert misses the rain

I remember you:
a sky of smog
coasting on thin ice,
limbs tangled
around the
sextile sun and uranus

bones

dust

insomnia on the silvermoon

but I am the wayward child
and there's a hole in my soul,
so please show me

show me what the stars look like tonight.
SenescenceBefore the rain,
all the leaves are brown.

Here's to green memories -
but the tree that loves its leaves
will never know the art of aging.

You found love in our yellow room,
but winter's holding my hand;
it won't be long.

When somebody says your name for the last time,
they gently take your life.
I should write this down.holy shit I should write this down -

the bad advice kills me;
like self publish WAY before they're ready.
how can we make it better?

you don't write to get a DD;
you write something awesome and then get a DD because you're there.

you don't pay to be published.

publishing isn't the end all be all.

we're ready for you.
Clarity"Come. You be a gear right here,"
she dares and she is tempting. I admit,
enclosed worlds don't appeal to me.
I am embers on the highway.
I'll forge myself into something greater.
The harvest suits me not, so forth I'll go;
judge me not.

Show me how the sun rises.
Even in the dead of winter,
I am scorched like the Earth from the inside-out.
The heat of this nameless, godless desert is trapped within my wounds.

Follow the shuffling feet,
the bloodied shapes
like patchwork hope sewn together from someone else's sacrifice.
Unmistakable, undeniable, guilty;
but the answer will have escaped you.
With the perfect clarity of ragged eyes
all become
Lost Seeking RevengeLost
In this frozen world
Lost
Because someone died
Lost
In this world of chaos
Lost
Because I saw them float away
They were ripped from my grip
Surrounded by bodies
Bodies of my dead and dying friends
"This is my fault, I must pay the toll"
Those were their last words
The last words they'll say
After the blade was sent through their back
After the blade peeked through their chest
Someday
I wish to find that child
Someday
I wish to wring his very neck
Someday
I will find my revenge
I will find it
Even if I have to tear this frozen world apart
Of A Cavity In My MemoryI used to have a name
molding my every fiber, rearranging
the disharmony.

The letters
make me free
and still, still
I am so lost.

Always lost.

I want
to move forward --
the only thing:

I will wake up dead.
WishesSo many people wish upon stars.
How many secrets do they hold?
Oh, it must be over a million,
Over a billion.
Trillions at least.
I can't even imagine how many there must be.
Not one person hasn't tried it.
Great, dark skies with tiny, twinkling lights.

Stars are trusted by people.
They never tell your secrets.
And they always listen.
Rise of the sun, the disappear.
Set of the sun, they are back to hear.
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Generally, this is not poetry, but it's not prose as well...I do consider it a short (short, short) story of a sort and will keep it in prose "folder" in my gallery, but I rather dropped it here...as it has some poetic flow (or I imagine it does) and as I wanted to use a visual template (being honest).
Anyway, consider it as you wish, hope you like it...not a real life story, but close enough.
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Mood: Love ~rikeem Jul 30, 2012
A heart wrenching , beautiful poem.
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~Maylar Jul 31, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you.
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Mood: Joy ~rikeem Aug 1, 2012
Your welcome,hope to see more poems from you.
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